Category: Writers Block
(copyrighted heh heh heh)
not that good anyway... ok, here goes:::
Hear the ocean in a shell,
a haunting melody captured in the ebb and swell.
Voices whisper from some distant land,
calling out for salvation's hand:
Wave upon wave of memory.
The clouds form fast to darken the sky
ominous silence screams your name.
And in the seabreeze, you strain to hear it,
a song, a voice, a prayer?
Beautiful! And very good..
Hey, that's neat. Mel
awwwww yall are cool thanks.
Kayla,
As a writer of poetry myself, I understand the beauty of it. Just wanted to say that your poem was extremely well-written, and wonderfully thought out!
You're poem was extremely well written. I've written some poetry, but mostly stories. But I can truly tell you that your use of words ar encredible. Keep up the good work girl.